Touchdowns for Breast Cancer is an event we hold every year in October. For every touchdown scored in the NFL this week we will be donating $100 to the Race for the Cure foundation. We will be screening every NFL game at our camp on Sunday October, 23rd and anyone is welcome to join. We will also be having an auction with all of the proceeds going to the foundation as well. We will be auctioning off some Minnesota Vikings tickets, some specialty cleats, and other amazing football items so don't miss out.
Also with the Dallas Cowboys and Carolina Panthers on bye weeks this week we will be having a few special guests visiting us. Cowboys wide receiver Cole Beasley and quarterback Tony Romo as well as Panthers Tight end Greg Olsen and linebacker Luke Kuechly will all be attending and signing autographs all day long. Make sure you bring family, friends and an appetite.
Greg Olsen supporting breast cancer during warm-ups
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Andrew provided a PERFECT critique. I agree with everything he wrote.
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